December 10, 2008

Making Him Beautiful

Posted in stories tagged at 7:25 am by littlesubmissions

Her fist thudded into his chest, wet smacking sounds mixing with his whimpers.  Spit ran down his face as his hands clawed at the sheets and he fought against instincts that screamed at him to do anything to make the pain go away.

The punishment stopped long enough for him to suck in a deep breath and he felt her soft hair brush across bruised skin and her teeth sink deep into his muscle, compressing already aching flesh until he stopped whimpering.  The teeth biting down a little harder then, never quite letting him get used to the pain before adding more.

Flashes of movement told her his eyelids had rolled back into his skull, and through the glare of a pain induced static haze he heard her voice.

“Right now you are more sexy than you have ever been to me.”

He lay under her, breathing and gasping from the echoes of what she had done to him.  Wished he had the strength to beg her to hurt him more, to make him even more beautiful.

And as the dull, rhythmic thump of her clenched fist began to smash into his chest again he knew it didn’t matter.  She understood, and would make him moan and suck sharp breaths through his clenched teeth anyway.  She would make him beautiful, whether he asked her to or not.

Copyright Jerry Jones.  Unauthorized use is prohibited.


  1. Eileen said,

    Ohhh, I like this one.

  2. littlesubmissions said,

    I like when you like!

  3. Verity said,

    Me too! Me too!

  4. […] — Making Him Beautiful, Little Submissions […]

  5. littlesubmissions said,

    I like when Verity likes also!

  6. Stabbity said,

    Oh, that was lovely.

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  8. littlesubmissions said,

    Thanks Stabbity!

  9. Ferns said,

    “Wished he had the strength to beg her to hurt him more, to make him even more beautiful.”

    I’m thinking about pain a lot these days, extremes of it, different kinds of pain, horrible excruciating pain, and it’s raw and honest and truthful… and yes, beautiful. The image of him not having enough strength to beg for more is hugely sexy.

    Thank you, as always.


  10. littlesubmissions said,

    You’re welcome, as always. 😉

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