February 9, 2010

Vanilla Scene

Posted in stories tagged at 11:02 pm by littlesubmissions

Flesh yielded under teeth, smashed nerve endings protesting as muscle collapsed. She felt him twitching instinctively underneath her, muscles involuntarily starting to pull away then stopping, then surrendering. Soft whimpers and harsh breathing rolling down over the back of her head as she ground her teeth further into him, pushing her jaw closed on his arm.

“Ummmm…” She licked her lips, and looked up at his closed eyes, the clenched jaw and veins in his neck. “I wish I could really eat you, tear off a big slab of muscle with my teeth and chew it up while you screamed and blood poured out of you onto the floor, grind your bones between my teeth and feel them crunch…”

She shuddered at his long exhalation and started to lean down, mouth open wide, waiting for him to look before she sank her teeth into his body again.

And then stopped. Frowned. Bit her bottom lip and cocked her head slightly. “Be right back.”

She hopped up and ran to the kitchen, saw him looking up at her still half dazed as she came back.

“An ice cream bar?”

She nodded, licked her lips as she pulled the paper away and off, casually tossed it on the floor. Small fingers carefully pried the sandwich in two, set one half aside, and slapped the other half down on his arm.

The sound of him grunting at the sudden cold on his hot skin came to her from far away, and she growled at the need to restrain herself from biting down as hard as she could. Shocks ran through her body as her teeth tore through the outer cookie, the crunch rippling through her mouth and down to her cunt, echoing all along her spine. Her eyes slammed shut, she took huge voracious bites, chewing, not bothering to swallow, letting crumpled remains fall back out, pushing her teeth into his body, pretending it was all him she was ruining. The slow, sensual pressure from earlier gave way to great, frantic bites, her teeth sliding into him and skimming along, pulling wet hard chunks away from his body as he gasped at the damage her teeth were doing.

A mess of destroyed food lay in a series of broken circles dotting his skin. She licked her lips and felt slime and debris running down her chin, and wanted more.

She slapped the other half of the ice cream bar down on him and fed again, pushing her teeth further into his skin, trembling as he gasped in shock at the cold of the ice cream and heat of her breath washing over his skin, her teeth pushing into him. Angry, ravenous sounds coming from deep inside her as she felt her teeth scraping along his skin, imagined it was his muscles and blood flooding her mouth.

Until it was gone again.

Her breathing was hard, torn ragged as she looked down at him, lying totally still and trying to keep his breathing calm. Her eyes washed down his body, then stopped.

Melted vanilla dripped off her teeth as she smiled, felt her hunger still pulsing deep inside of her.

“Get your cock hard. I want to try something.”

Copyright Jerry Jones. Unauthorized use is prohibited.


  1. Mike said,

    holy shit ! What an ending!

    • littlesubmissions said,

      Thanks. πŸ˜‰

  2. QuietStormDom said,

    I enjoyed reading it.

    Great piece, delightful !!

    • littlesubmissions said,

      Thank you, glad you enjoyed it.

  3. Lilith said,

    πŸ˜€ This made me lol, and that doesn’t ever happen with stories like this (at least not in a good way ;), but this certainly was)!. Love the ending!

    • littlesubmissions said,

      Thanks, I’ve often thought one of the scariest top phrases is “I want to try something…” πŸ™‚

      • Lilith said,

        Well, I guess “Oops…” is worse πŸ˜‰

      • littlesubmissions said,

        Touche’. I’m not a fan of “Wait, what was your safe word?” either… πŸ˜€

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